To create a detailed character profile
Context: A description of a character in Chitty Chitty Bang Bang
Success criteria:
Describe the way the character looks.
Describe the way the character moves.
Describe the way the character speaks.
Describe the characters actions.
Use quality adjectives
Extension
To use precise nouns appropriately
To use ISPACE.
I can use adjectives before the noun.
Context: A description of a character in Chitty Chitty Bang Bang
Success criteria:
Describe the way the character looks.
Describe the way the character moves.
Describe the way the character speaks.
Describe the characters actions.
Use quality adjectives
Extension
To use precise nouns appropriately
To use ISPACE.
I can use adjectives before the noun.
Menacingly, the Child Catchers evil voice echoes loadly every time he speaks in his highpitched tone that is often followed with his cackle. Like a witch some of his famous voises are very evil and squeaky and often he says "children" as that is the main job that he has to perform for the Queen.
Aswell as the tone in his voice being evil the child catcher creeps around silently, as not to be found on his search for unwelcome children. Sneaking around on the top of his toes which are squeezed into ridiculously pointy shoes , the awful man never fails to catch all the children he needs as with his extremly long nose he can smell out children from an extrodianary distance.
Tired after a long day of work, the childrens worst enemy still battles through the night. The bold black tophat that is placed on the top of his abnormally large head makes him stand out strongly from even the most beautifully colourful crowd. Aswell of this he has huge sticking out ears and bulging brown eyes that jump out of his serious face,like an over excited toad. Often the childcatcher moves his face very close to his enemys just like a man who is very drunk.
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